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写给母亲的一封信英语作文


点评专家:
赵秀凤,中国石油大学外国语学院教授、博士,全国英语创新大赛顾问委员会副。主任,第十届、第十一届全国创。新英语大赛评委。
参赛佳。作
姓名:张家碧
学校:郑州外国语学校
成绩:97
A。 Letter to My Mom
Dear Mom,I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Tod。ay, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came floodin。g back. Because count- less hou。rs were inv。ested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance。 for me to participate in parties and sch。ool plays, let alone fully enjoy t。he authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the fre。edom to cho。ose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my fa。ce?
Howev。er, though I´ve labele。d it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding。 to have been tiger tra。ined. As George Eliot putslt,"I。t never rains roses: when w。e want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur。 growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. F。u。rthermore, it has endowed me with str。ong。 willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved t。o be a most pre- cious qualit。y of mine.。 Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has。 benefited me in the lorlg run de。spite the cost of the。 immediate joy o。f a normal carefree cbil。dhood.
Now, looking back on my child。hood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you,。 my dear mother. As。 I am to commence m。y c。ollege life now,I pro。mise you that I&a。cute;ll improve myself ina "tiger"。 way, goi。ng all。 out to fulfill all of my dr。ea。ms.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger t。raining”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达。深切感激之情。文章结。构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾。驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。




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